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New label - Need feedback
submitted about 10 years ago by padaman420

Hi,

Here's my finished product. I would like to have some feedback on it.

Ma Sauce - Ejuice

Thanks

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by joesphaaabout 10 years ago

I cringe at the overuse of the word "premium" in this market.

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by MrsCustardSeesYouabout 10 years ago

No kidding. Me too. Thesaurus time was necessary at least two years ago in terms of the overuse of the word "premium."

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by mana_dorkabout 10 years ago

Agreed. But aside from that, I like the layout/design of the label very much. I'm really digging the fact that people are moving away from gaudy, cartoony labels.

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

I don't have a choice but to agree with you all, Vaping is something barely coming out in my town, and if you woudl taste the juices that are offered here, you wouldn't be shy putting on the label :)

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by nylleyoabout 10 years ago

give this man upvotes!

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by D3fault121about 10 years ago

Looks great. Nice simple clean look. Only a few small suggestions. Maybe add PG/VG % and a small flavor description even if it's off to the side and not centered on the label. It's always hard to judge a flavor by its name if it's not straight forward.

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by GamerGuy6708about 10 years ago

Looks great. What printer do you use?

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

Used a HP1505 Lazer Printer with Avery Clear 4 x 2 mailing labels

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by cromag5150about 10 years ago

I like it. Simple and straight forward which is a stand out in my book.

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

Thanks, that was the exact goal we wanted to achieve, simple with a little vintage twist to it. Clear labels and clear twist droppers go very well together.

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by TheVapeScapeabout 10 years ago

Very clean and simplistic...I like it! One thing you might want to consider is putting a flavor description on the bottle. I know not everyone cares if it is there (and some of your flavors names are self explanatory but when I buy juice I tend to buy 15mls of 4-5 different flavors at a time, so I can really get a feel for a company. And after it arrives and is steeped 1-2 months go by ... and ...... I never remember what "Obama Your Llama, Osama" is supposed to taste like. Sure, I could look it up online but its a convenience thing and customers like convenience!

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

You mark a good point here, I'll have to find a way to get the info in there, the ECTA requires alot of infomation to be put on the bottle so I'll have to figure this one out.

I thought about putting a QR code, but this trend is way past it's time now.

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by slyburgerabout 10 years ago

> I thought about putting a QR code, but this trend is way past it's time now.

http://picturesofpeoplescanningqrcodes.tumblr.com/

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

loll that's what I was telling myself !

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by crappy_guitaristabout 10 years agoProud Sidebar Reader!

i like it Alot!!! very simplistic

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by VAEQBkBrf3jyf4about 10 years ago

very nice.

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by Tee_Babout 10 years ago

Very clean. Great look.

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by nylleyoabout 10 years ago

really clean labels. i like minimalistic stuff.

what are those bottles btw? i need those bottles caps

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

Got them at SKS-PACKAGING, alot of choice there.

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by Arodsteezy2about 10 years ago

They look great but I would consider reducing the size of the white on black text. The big black boxes on either side detract from the minimalist style you are going for. Add more white space.

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by rabidnzabout 10 years ago

Good advice, also a born date is great. And ~60ml instead of +/-60ml if you are'nt gonna just say 60.

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

They have a birth date, batch number and expiration date. I have made them to meet the ECTA requirements, And they only allow 40% of the label to put your logo ans juice name,

Since my market is french and english speaking, each black panel has a different language.

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by tournantabout 10 years agoMixologist

Not bad at all. Better than many, even.

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by JourneyToStrongabout 10 years ago

Jvoudrais ben gouter ton juice mon ami :)

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

Message privé envoyé.

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by Botboy141about 10 years agoGunner's Gold Gourmet E-Juice

Are those clear labels or white? I think clear would look much better fwiw.

Also be careful with the size. The new EU regulations that should be passing effective 1/1/2016 limit bottle size down to 10ml. Will want to make sure your label is scalable down to that size so you don't lose brand recognition when it happens.

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

These are clear labels. And I'm looking to sell in Canadian market only, I know, not the biggest, but If I can get this stuff out from west coast to east coast I'll be more than happy !

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by Botboy141about 10 years agoGunner's Gold Gourmet E-Juice

Fair enough. I just saw the word french somewhere and assumed EU rather than my neighbor to the north!

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by skiddlzninjaabout 10 years agoFrugivore

They look nice, clean. As others have stated, you'll want to put a flavor description on the bottles. But as you've stated, there's a lot of stuff that can't be taken off the label. Looking at all the white space, I suggest you find stock photos of the flavors these juices will be emulating, and put them as a watermark on your labels. This way, each flavor looks unique(which adds value for brand and flavor recognition) as well as adding a reliable flavor description. It would definitely be kind of a cool little easter egg for people who find they enjoy your juice.

Also, I can't tell from the picture, but I'd suggest using high-gloss labels, because they seem to stand up better to stray drops of ejuice than the paper labels.

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

Thanks for the input, These we made out of my own printer in order to have an Idea of what the final product would look like, I will have them printed overseas in pet material to get that glossy edge and waterproof.

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by skiddlzninjaabout 10 years agoFrugivore

Yeah, I believe Avery sells different styles of mailing labels, one of them being a high-gloss.

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

I couldn't find any clear high gloss labels from avery but anyhow, those chinese company over at Alibaba have great prices for short runs!

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by TheNebulousMindabout 10 years ago

Looks excellent. I really like the clean minimalist look.

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by markfromguabout 10 years ago

Nice and simplistic. Any thoughts of adding color to the labels to make em stand out from the rest of the juices on the rack? Would be cool to see variations if you have any.

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by Arsenault185about 10 years ago

These will stand out simply because they don't have color

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by padaman420about 10 years ago

The whole marketing behind it is minimalist vintage black and white. IMHO, i think the way the bottles look, it will intrigue many consumers.

Like Arsenault185 said, with all these cartoonish colored bottles on the shelves, my bottle will be much easier to spot than one of those where's Waldo bottles. :P

We're mainly focusing on local and web market. If there's demand for distribution, we'll take it on from there.

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by macKdittyabout 10 years ago

I think that looks great. Really simple and clean, good job.

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by Bigskixabout 10 years ago

Like it. Clean and simple. The word premium makes me feel like I'm being taken advantage of. Other then that, very nice👌🏻😎

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