If this is for your personal consumption or sharing with friends its more than fine. I'm still writing on my bottles with a sharpie and covering it with scotch tape. This from a graphic artist thats done hundreds of product layouts over the last 20+ years. (Yes, I'm lazy when not getting paid.) Oh and congrats on a straight forward name that describes the flavor. So much better than some of the other stupid names I come across.
I like them. the only suggestion I would have is that you just drop the lettering down a hair so you don't cut quite so close to the top of the label. I feel like people get fooled by fancy labels. Some people outsource the labels, or buy a $1000 printer and then claim it is "premium juice." I judge by flavor!
What did you use to make your label, I've been thinking of creating a label lately. Was it the really common 3m labels, or did you do it on normal paper and then attach it?
I just used 1 in round Avery brand labels that come on 4x6 sheets. Made the design in Photoshop then used averys software to print them. The software comes with templates you can use as well
I would put a little bit of spacing between the details on the bottom. It appears cluttered. Also font choice for the bottom half could be better. It does look like a movie ticket, which can be good, I suppose. But I would change it to a more thin, elegant script to compliment the graphic that you have up. Just my two cents!
I like it but I'd make it bigger. If it's just for you & friends though, looks good. Better than my painter's tape w/ sharpie labels.
Add some safety information to it if you are giving it out. Who knows who will handle the bottle down the road and you want to make sure they know it has nicotine in it. Adding a DANGER: Product may contain nicotine is a great start. I would also list the ingredients, like Bottle Contains: VG, PG, Nicotine, Artificial Flavors.
One little thing that you're doing there (and a lot of even pro juicemakers do) is "2mg"
2mg what? 2mg of gold? 2mg of arsenic? 2mg of unidentified stuff on your workbench you decided to infuse into each bottle? Without the complete units of mg/ml it's just jibberish.
And even then, 2mg/ml of what? Urine? Clay? Ice cream?
Absolute shortest text string to convey the information completely would be: 0.2%NIC
I will give you my opinion if you send me a bottle of that.
Haha wait until I get some more bottles in and if you pay shipping I'll send you the two flavor a I have so far