Colors are all bad imo. Take the guesswork out of if put your main color in here and flip through and find the color you want they all will work with your input color.
https://color.adobe.com/
This is really nifty
While not professionally taught I do web and graphic design and i tell my clients to bring me onecolor and then I use a tool like this and we go from there. If they bring two I'm putting one in and then finding a color from a app like this that is closest to their second color unless they are branded already. This makes it easy and keeps things looking good no questions asked.
Your main logos script letters don't line up, kerning or tracking is off and it looks weird.
I'm not a fan of whimsical font, but that may be part of your brand identity.
The bottom text curve should match the space it is in, like the way the top does.
The green is a bit much for me. It's the most eye catching part and it's the literally the backdrop.
Important when creating a label is to have two things imo:
to know the material (color,properties to be sticked on) to contain all the information required to be a finished product. Eg. signs , text , infos , etc.
Let me give you an example. Let's say that i find your liquid from a friend. Where is the website or fb page to find more info? How i may contact you? etc
Nice job - my input would be:
- kern the "Kodars" so that the letters connect correctly.
- I'd switch up the Ren & Stimpy looking font to something san-sarif - I think it wouldn't clash with the "Kodars" as much.
- I think that dayglo green background might be a bit too much. I'd try a deep red, maroon, or deep purple and make the black lettering white.
But that's just what I would do! I think you did a nice job!
That green would be extremely tough to print.
RGB colors looks great on screen, but printers can only print CMYK.
When working on a label in RGB, save it and do a test conversion to CMYK to see what happens.
IMO: too green for the background...
I still don't understand why companies put "premium" e liquid on their bottles..... Yes they want people to think their juice is a premium quality, but I think they all should be "premium" quality and not "standard" quality.
BUT back to what I was saying: just too bright of green and I agree with /u/senorchip that the foreground needs to pop more with brand, flavor, and all the important information on it.
Not all juices are "premium" quality. Ive had some horrible shit
Same here. I have had some juices as well labelled as a "premium" and it was not even walmart quality. I mean 9/10 they're great quality juice, but I was just stating IMO. :P Not hating! BTW: let me know where/when you can get your juice. I like supporting fellow redditors when the chance comes able!
I just worry the lettering may be difficult to read once it's the size it will actually be for a 30mil bottle. Other than that, I'd agree with a lot of others and say tone down that green a little. I like the other colors though.
Too green and font is harder to read.
I whipped up something in a couple minutes in photoshop using your same overall design.
http://puu.sh/ggyr7/dade61ca89.jpg